Comments : Stick To Your Guns

  • 19 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    Hey, another great poem. i like the things you choose to write about. i loved the second stanza especially the thing about "reality" being changeable. personally i don't believe anything these days. everyone's got an agenda. maybe you should put this is life, society. just a suggestion- tc. xmollyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Hey I was intrigued to come and check your profile - you write about alot of the same things i do - only your really good at it LoL You have such a way with words and i really enjoyed reading this poem - mainly for the fact that you haven't tried to hide any realism of the facts, but spoke them so elequently! Anyways a wonderful poem - im off to read more!
    Much Luv Eirisa xxoo

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    so true. seems simple. yet complicated. that's how i saw your poem. it's like straight out honesty. i like that. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Really awe inspiring....u r te finest poet on the site

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    wow, that was awesome.

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    su fukin perb ... 5

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    Reality is changeable
    As plastic surgeons find
    Another life to ruin
    Another face to design
    Face lift tummy tuck
    What you tell them to do
    You see an old friend
    He doesn't recognize you

    that is sheer talent .. i love this verse . read it many times and it just get b8tr and b8tr

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Great descriptions and quite scary. Sorry i can't give a better comment. I'll try and get back to this poem, i'm just a little busy at the moment.

  • 18 years ago

    by NIKKI

    That was great. Really inspiring ur 1 of the best writters on this site.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Long but good 5\5 :)