Wow just wow, once again an awesome poem, you labelled a lot of the wrongs within society today and i really felt this poem, if the right people saw your poemsd i think it would change there perspective great powerful writing

i liked the poem, but I don't think it is a shakespearian sonnet (they only have 10 syllables per line, and it should be iambic).

I agree with Sean Allen, that it wasn't Shakespearian.. well maybe the word ecocide was. :)

I also love this, it was very descriptive considering that one has to keep the lines short. You have a very good imagination. The lines were tide in fair enough to make sense.

A 5, because I know how hard it is to write acrostic poems.

wow! ur characteristic 'in your face' poetry never fails to impress me....5/5 for a kewl poem...by the by wot does omolade mean??

oops- i din't know it has to have 10 syllables to be a shakespearean poem. thanks for all the comments. xmollyxx

Apart from the error in your syllable count which you have already picked up on, i liked it. I think it's very creative of you to try something new and combine these two forms. Maybe you could try it again sometime with 10 syllables per line, i would love to read it. A very important message. Well done!

First I wanted to thank you for commenting on my poem :), and I agree w/ what you wrote. Secondly I wanted to say what a great poem this was! You have powerful words and I wish more people would understand that we need more love not more hatred in the world. But I doubt there will ever be a day when we all love. I do hope that evil does not win, even though it does seem to have won....Great poem 5/5

I think this was so creative, accurate and that last line - extremely thought provoking - another great piece from you Molly! Thanks for sharing Eirisa

:) Yet another great write, I have to say, you write the best "poems about life" :) Everything that was written is so true, I have a friend (another poet on here) who I believe will love reading your poems, I'll tell him about you when I get the chance :) Take care.