Comments : Too Much Time on My Hands

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    4.9? for this poem??

    thats the 1s sign to express how gd it was!!
    u opening flowed in an impressing WAY..seriouslYYy !!

    You say the truth is a waste of time
    And the truth is not worth a dime
    >>how flowing these two lines been and
    how amazing was the replies after:

    But what is wealth really worth
    Woe to the wealthy on this earth

    >>yes sense-full question

    The truth is like the light from the sun

    >>there is nothin as bright as truth!!

    I can't hold time, or love in my hands
    Sometimes I cannot meet life's demands

    >> i loved the imagination over here..these been my fav two lines... though ur last ones gave me severe goosebumps

    we all neeed true love..nothing but true love can be worth it...or even gd enough to get there

    5/5 loved reading this
    flowed so well..ur title really is catchy