Stay with me my sweet

by ChildofGod87   Sep 21, 2004


Stay with me for now and forever!

I want you to know that I like you so much and I hope you do, too! I could doubt in you, but for some reason you give me signs from up above! It lets me know that you do have feels for me and that you sense me how I sense you!
My sweet crush that I have.
Oh, how it's true and sense able!
Dang, how you touch me! I shiver with every way that you just try to open up to me
I know you can feel me also, my sweet! From the look or the feeling that you give me it's like I know something that I haven't known before

Stay with me and don't let go of my heart!
I won't break your "Sweet" heart!
For how that world comes to it seems that your here with me!

~I wonder what if he sees this what would he think of it or say?!?! {I hope nothing bad..:|!}~

*^*Thanx for reading my poem..please comment/rate I'd really appreciate:| And if you'd want give me advice...Thanx:)*^*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sammie

    Aw, I liek dis one ^.^ and thanks for your comment, ^.^ it made me smile, grrl, I really lieked this one so I'm given yew a 5! Hope to see more of your work soon, xoxo

    ~*SaMmIe*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Hi Sedusha

    This was a nice poem i think you should show it to him and let him know how you feel. If he doesn't appreciate this poem then hes not worth another moment of your time girl! Anyways my only piece of advice is too not use so many exclamation marks and unnecessary grammer like that, it just makes it a lil hard on the old eyes to read and defeats the purpose and emphasis on which these lil symbols are supposed to play...besides that this poem was great and a true pleasure to read Eirisa xoxox

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