Happiest 19th Birthday

by Eibutsina   Sep 21, 2004


I remember when we were first friends
Catching buses across town just to hang out
At the tender ages of thirteen
Thinking we knew what life was all about.

We partied and we had our differences
Through it all we never lost touch
At times like this I am reminiscing back
Didn’t those moments mean so much?

I’ll cherish those memories always
As times so quickly pass us by
Your smile hasn’t changed a bit
Nor has that glisten in your eye.

Together we have faced some trials
We have grown together as a team
And after all that has been said and done
We’ve never let anything come in between.

Over the years we’ve become so much closer
Your more of a baby sister to me
I’m so proud of the woman you are today
I wish your every happiness comes to be.

Today your turning nineteen
In a way I’m lost for words to say
But I believe in you and your dreams coming true
Have the Happiest 19th Birthday!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Not even girl - i really admire the uniqueness of your poetry its got such originality printed all over it and thanks so much for your kind words!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    Another great poem... I'de read more today.. But it's 2 am here and i'm getting tired.. But your poem.. Is great again... Far far better than me... But hey now i have something to work towards... We keep up the awesome work... though i'm sure you will
    Take Care
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks to all you ladies - my girls :o) your comments are always so welcome and valued!

    Semaran - so glad you came and checked out my new poems hun will email you!

    Luv Eirisa xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Semaran

    I have to say this is not a poem that i can comment about with personal experience, my best friend from those years ago has drifted from me and i still see him on occasion we have grown without the influence of each other...
    But i somewhat drifted off there, well written poem and obvious intent.
    With a hint of hypocrisy i must say to hold onto your friends but i don’t really think you need to be told...
    It’s nice to notice how you have merged congratulations, love and growing up/experiences into one for this poem. Great work.

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    another awesome peom by you gurl of course, ur such an awesome poet it blows me away .. and I still LOVE my poem you wrote for me "accept my call" / still cherish it and always will ! YIKES ! lol .. Well I called him but I'll email you ALL about it lata .. cuz where I am its like 3 in the mornin and im tired as hell and its gonna be a long ass email cuz u kno ur my gurl .. haha .. This poem was like the cutest and it was da best of course not as good as "accept my calls" but definately a gr8 one, u write so beautiful and your wording is just totally and completely flawless .. keep it up gurl and ur goin to get some where wit ur writin i know it .. Lol ... ! ! ! Check out my new post(s) I added like two or three more , so Im hoping to see what you think .. cuz ur like the one person who knows the story behind the poem .. ya know what i mean ? Well of course u do cuz ur my gurl ! lol .. ! Awesome Job with this one and for all of them .. GR8 WORK ! And, Hope to hear from ya soon .. Lol .. ! TTYL .. LYLAS GURLIE !
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