Comments : Worth it...

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    A struggle for the lock and handle
    Two tiny feet appear on my bedroom floor.

    ^^ that part was sooo cute!! Makes me really wish someone in my family would have a baby (since I'm the youngest)

    Eirisa I know I say the same things when I comment on poems your write about your boy, but these are truly my favorite...I even like poems about your son better than the ones you've written for me! The feelings of a mother is obvisouly something not all can relate to becuase not everyone is a parent, but you so easily make the readers feel your emotions.
    I know I've also said that everytime I read a poem about your son I can not help but cry, yet again you caused my eyes to sparkle with tears! Its so beautifully written and not a thing is out of place. I just hope as he grows older he realizes how strong of a love you have for him, because me only being your sister and not your daughter, I can see it so much..You love for him glows and shines so radiant through your poems its amazing to read!

    Loved this write sis!

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my...Eirisa, another beautiful penned, flowed with beautiful emotions..i enjoyed read them, wishing you have a good day....bert ~

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    The love for our children and the love we receive from them give us so much strength .
    For every sadness their is the beauty of joy .
    You show such beautiful love for your little boy is this poetic beauty .
    Thank-you for sharing Risa

  • 14 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Loved this poem. nice flow, nice rhyme, very enjoyable! Jpoet*

  • 14 years ago

    by mary

    Wow good poem, i can't relate because i'm not a parent , im 20 years old and love kids and babies in general and when i wanted to give up and quit on life i would see my friends little girl look up at me and smile and say mary i love you this much with her blond curly hair, or i would here my friends little boy on the other end of the phone well we talked
    children are a gift for GOd no doubt in my mind at all.
    keep writing

  • 14 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    This is beautifull i shed a tear hand in there for him :') thank you for the poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Semaran

    Thats a nice poem.
    I especially like how you shorten the lines as you approach the end of the first half. It gives it a sense of.. i suppose falling. It works very well in any case.

    Well balanced emotion, despair and hope.
    And as always verywell portrayed.
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    Also i like the name Eirisa.. whats with the change?