Comments : Who I Am

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Nice poem, I liked it, the pattern was different to most other poems. I don't think it's bad at all!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..this poem is amazing!! its not bad at all!!! i can relate to alot in this poem!! wonderful job!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Terray

    I think it was a very good poem I couldrelate to it a lot but that might not be a god thing. Well you're an excelent poet keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a couragious self expression. smooth poetic flow

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    i love to sit and just write what comes out , it maynot make any sence to anyone else but i enjoy it , it helps me to deal with feelings . if poetry is (as i percieve it to be ) a way of expressions then therefore there is no good or bad poetry .. its just poetry ..
    so thank you for sharing with us .. i have read some of your other works and some are v v good indeed ..

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This was an amazing poem, hun. I know it's hard...but that's life I guess. I enjoyed this very much, the pattern and verses were very unique. We're here for you, whenever you need a hand to pull you back up on your feet. Lots of love, always, anytime.

    Strength §

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael/7MidniteTears

    excellent you are an awesome poet i felt your pain, its just like..........me

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacquelyn Raso

    I love this poem. The emotion just screams to me. Keep up the excellent work. You have a lot of talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    I really like this poem

  • 19 years ago

    by StarGirl

    I love this poem, it's great hun

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    wow.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    This poem was amazing it gave me the chills! I was shivering the whole time I read this it amazed me how much I felt the poem as I read it. Trust me it's a great poem I can't find any other words for this poem just that I LOVE IT. It has got to be one of the best poems I have read. Keep it up.

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Keith

    Nice poem, Im kindof the same way thats why i write and express myself :-) You should read some of my poems :-) "Her Story" is a good one as well as "Dying for You" Both are true in thier own way - Happy reading!

  • 19 years ago

    by chris johnson

    if this is about you, i have news, your better than you think you are, i can tell just by your poetry

  • 19 years ago

    by Zayda

    damn girl! this is an awesome piece of writin, ur gifted!!! wow!!! can relate to wut u say, somehow its wut i have always tried to say n cudnt find da words to explain myself straight.. this does rly speak to my heart, thank u, love, *Zayda*