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by sinister   Sep 23, 2004


This is just an excerpt (1st try):-

how can tell you that to me your eyes are like the deepest pools i have ever known and that every time i look into to them i drown more and more in love with you.

that your kissable lip sings and speaks words of silken sweetness every time you talk to me.

that i believe you bathed in the purest of milk, for your skin is as smooth and as clean and as comparable to nothing else i have ever known.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    very good for your first try. I would keep going with this one. Adding more to it. I love your descriptions, these few lines already pull me into the poem. I believe if you work longer at it and keep it going, this will be a beautiful poem. It is beautiful now, but you know what i mean. Keep the passion going.

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