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  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Great poem! Keep it up and thank you for the comment! =) Take care!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by Oobie

    hey thanks for the comment on my poem. Great Job On this one its cute...you domt look 99!
    ok later...
    --you know how i do---
    Amanda
    aka
    Oobie

  • 19 years ago

    by hayley williams

    definate 5 gurl, i loved this poem. Im sorry you lost forever, hayley xx

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    brilliant, I can really relate to this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Aww,,,I'm sorry things didnt work out for you that sucks! But seems like in every realationship theres someone getting hurt or something turns out wrong! But you did an awsome job with this poem i really loved it!! Great JOB!
    Much love to you~ Chelsey~
    P.S...well worth a five!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    Great poem...i really liked it..and i really can relate...keep writin....

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    *~*Maybeth*~*
    this was Excellent piece that you've written...:)Good Job...
    I'm sry that you about your lose...Keep being "Strong" and Keep up with your poems!!!...
    *5/5*...Thanx for commenting on my poems...come and stop by going;)lol..

    **All the Love Sedusha**

  • 19 years ago

    by Britt

    hey this is a great poem!! i luved it! great work keep it up!:D..i gave it a 5!

    *Britt*

  • 19 years ago

    by don mohr

    Very good! keep it going!

  • 19 years ago

    by CaL25

    Nice poem! Felt it.. Thanks for commenting on mine.. Check out the new ones if you get a chance ya

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful job! Enjoyed. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh whatta sad tale - but a wonderful poem to tell it - another great poem by you Maybeth full of heartfelt honesty and emotion as per usual well worth a five hun!

    Luv EIRISA

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    wow, great poem!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Randi

    Hey... Your Poems are really good too... Im glad you liked my poem, i wrote it about my bf... who i love to death!