hmm intrestesting poem. I really enjoyed it. I liked the fact that the he forseen what was coming, I liked the whole story behind it. I really thought this was wrote great and havn't read anything quiet like it. Great Job.

Very good-very good!

Thank you for the nice comments, people. Meena:
The footnote about believing the birds cry if repeated is a sign of death is true, and the Omaha people did war with the Souix, but the rest is just a story based on facts.
Jacki: Thanks for the comments, but the person telling the story is a girl. You prob don't know, but it talks about working in the field, and although the men turned the soil preparing, the women always planted.