AWSOME!!!! I LOVE this, this is completely one of the best poems I've ever read! LOVE IT! (maybe because I'm obbsesed with D&D-like stuff?) but I really love it, 5/5!

Awsome poem and story

Very well written

This is really good! If this was a book i would certainly read it!

The flow was really amazing, a poetic story, just great

Although I love all your work, I must admit I never read any of the "Dark" ones because I didn't know what to expect. But I read this one and what do you know... :-) There is nothing of yours I have read that I didn't like! Great Poem! Really good! I see this as something someone could be reading to their child at bedtime! I love it!