wow that was great. your an awsome poet. keep up the good work.

wow! that was really good! keep it up!

omg i got shivers down my spine, that was so beautiful in a sad way. brilliant work.
xnikkix

Beautiful poem...very touching..loved it <3
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Wow, this was just amazing. I couldn't believe it, the shock at the end kind of got to me...great job. Just excellent.

Megan §

•°¤*(¯`° Wow! brilliant poem....bought tears to my eyes!! well...keep up the good work becuase you're a rally good writer...take care luv kim xxxx °´¯)*¤°•

that was amazing and beutiful wonderful werk u left me speechless.

hey.. taht was a great poem but im not accusing u but i ithink i heard it somewhere else but i miht have just ur poem before anywho... GREAT JOB!!!i really like it its so real..