omg that is so good!!! it makes me shiver!

excellent poem! i love it.

fookin live it ... can i nick some of it for a song ?

I liked how the work was worded and you gave a constant rythm which was very good. keep it up

I love this! 5!!! Simple and yet so friggin awesome!

I love this poem Amy, and i am so sorry, i love you too!

AW

I love this poem Amy, and i am so sorry, i love you too!

AW