wow, this is really deep! i love it, keep it up!

awesome!!! this is a very deep poem...and i love it!!! keep it up!

alwayz,
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Very deep and amazing use of words. Descriptive and imaginative. Fantastic work.

That was amazing!! Truely in control of the whole poem! That was intense! Gave it a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

WHAT A POWERFUL POEM I LOVE IT, IT'S ONE OF THE MOST POWERFUL POEMS I'VE EVER READ WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!! CHECK OUT A FEW OF MY POEMS IF U GOT THE TIME CHEERS. xXxXxXx Jodes.