You are a really good writer. This was a great poem and i liked the story too it. wow.

I think that was one of the funniest poem i've ever read. great job.

Wow Michael. I'll have to think about this one for a while.

Great piece Michael, love the consistency of your rhyme scheme.

Ha ha ha ha oh gosh!!!! Michael this is genius!!!!
It's cute in a way but the ending is just epic ha ha, thank you so much for a good knee-slapping laugh!!!