Awesome poem Kevin!!! Soooooo Amazing! you're such a good writer!! Like I dunno how you do it..You're a genius! Amazing..loved every bit of it..<33
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Hey Kevin!!
Brilliant written. Really got into it, felt.

This poem to me is a testament of human frailty.

You really are an awe-inspiring poetic magician. Great work!!

I'll be posting this week my new poem funny enough almost on the same lines, check it out.

Kind regards
Hayley

very nice poem...

GREAT POEM, WELL DONE.

Awesome poem! =) I totally loved it. Keep it up and take care!

great poem - very meaningful!!

Wow..What else is there to say after they all have took the words from my mouth? :) You did a splendid job Kev! Your descriptive points were just awesome. You are a very good writer, and you deserve no less than a 5.0.

Take Care, Jess xx

the symbolism and imagery used in this is just beautiful. you are very talented, i;ve admired alot of your work. i especially liekd the lines "Drowned in a pool of self
An echo in my oceans
hidden depths"
there is so much hidden meaning in those lines and i love the way you put it. i dont kno why the rating on this is so low, someone is obviosly jealous because you are talented.

another great one. i absolutly love your choice of symbolism and images. i especially liked the lines, "Drowned in a pool of self
An echo in my oceans
hidden depths"
the symbolism is so deep in this poem and pictures you use are powerful in emotion and amazingly written. you truly talented, keep it up

Hey, I liked the use of the word purl, I definitely had to look that one up! I thought the juxtoposition of the sea and your mind/self was interesting, and the specific metaphors you insert and expand upon are definitely very good choices. Great work.

wow very good ur a gr8 poet i just wanted 2 know wat ur poetry was like cuz of that disscussion post u put up "the stupid questiongane" i thought that was gr8 and joined in it was very funny to read over gr8 poem in any case please check mine out
luv rach

wow very good ur a gr8 poet i just wanted 2 know wat ur poetry was like cuz of that disscussion post u put up "the stupid questiongane" i thought that was gr8 and joined in it was very funny to read over gr8 poem in any case please check mine out
luv rach

wow your definatly one of my fav poets on this site Keven. YOu have just a way with words that makes whatever you talk about sound amazing. Dont ever stop writing. I hope that you continue to post your poems on here because you are one of the best, and i never get tirred of what you have to say. I hope everything is ok and you get back to posting soon.

a brilliant poem the depth of the concept was beautifully reached through your words the metaphor about drowning in one's self is deffinitely understandable ~ 5/5 on this one you have a wonderful talent

Wow two years and still nothing? hm I'm wondering if u ever plan on comming back? I guess not.. well this is just one more poet to add to the list.. farewell and I hope everything is all rite