awww- i like this, it reminds me of my friend who i was in love (actually lust) with. he's at another skool now and i miss him greatly- he was one of the few with the looks and the brains. nice work- short and sweet. xmollyxx

nice poem. can relate to it so much, reminds me of how i still feel deep down. and i dont think that feeling will ever go away

Another cute poem...Hope ur feeling ok now....take care...FIVE>>>

i used to think this all the time! great job!

nice and short. really sweet too! great poem. thanks for the comment, i appreciate it lots. take care:)

Not bad at all....it got a bit unbalanced in the middle there, i had no idea where the structure had went..but you pulled it back nicely at the end...short and sweet....

I wish more people understood the less is more idea.