Wonderful poem! Thank you for the comments on my poems =) Take care!

~Grace

Strong words and a great thought to pen down. Good. Hope to read more from you.

Thanks for the comments. I got to read your poem because of that. Thanks.

Oh and welcome to the site!!! =)

awesome .. ! It was so cute i loved it .. gave it a five ! lol .. and oh yea thanks for ur comment on my poem it meant a lot .. keep checkin mine out and of course ill keep lokin at urs . .thnx again !

Thankyou for taking the time to leave such words of kindness on my poetry - i would appreciate if you could read a few more and give me some feedback...

Anyways Cleopas this is so unique this poem i haven't read anything close on this site and its a work you should be truly proud of - i had to read it a few times over to understand the vocabulary you had used but it was well worth...a wonderful and original poem hun keep up the great work!

Luv Eirisa

that is so true