D@mn!!! You go girl!! Your awsome!!! I love thesepoems Eirisa it shows another side of you and its so great!! I look forward to reading every line! ONly one word can fit this!...TERRIFIC!! nice job keep it up!..Much love to ya!,
ya baby sis, Chelsey!

Thanks my darling! Luv ya!

Uhh i really don't like this guy.. You deserve so much more.. You're so talented that i don't think you should waste ink on this guy.. anyways great poem again well writen as always.. Keep it up Take care
Angel

Wow. Despite the subject, there's an unequivocal passion to this poem. Whatever else he has done, he hasn't taken that from you, nor your ability to express powerfully. Bon chance, Eirisa.

Really profound, I find it definative too. The personale of women, the pains they are left to carry and all.. This is a great work of art that needs a place in the hall of fame. keep it up. Was just thinking if it was "bear" you meant or 'bare" verify pls.

Wonderful!!!

this is very powerful. something similar happened in my life. good good writing. ---sara

My God.....that was the most amazing piece of peotry that i have read so far i think. I don't know what it was that it was about the poem...i mean wow....

i know it is a true experience..because i can tell from your writing, your amazing...i can never seem to end a poem. The way you ended yours was amazing.

Trust me hun, there are lots of men out there who are looking for a loving and not cheating woman, keep on looking, just pick one whom you think will not be like him....how do i know, well the comment your reading is from someone who has been cheated on more times then i can count.

Keep your chin up,

Lots of Envy,
Dark Savior Aka Shaun or Benjamin Dark.

P.S.

Five/Five

Very nice, Eirisa!!!

I liked this because it showed the emotion and the decisiveness of your being; your strength. So many seem to lack that. Good for you.