Wow! I like the rhyme scheme, how it rhymes in more then one way (unlike mine :-) ) and excellent describing (the floatie part was good!)

hey great job i gave u a five. i especially liked the ocean part. thanx for the awsome comments on my poems im glad u liked them lol. u keep writtin too!

I chuckled at the "floaties" but wow, what a poem!! You certainly have not lost your talent, thank God for that. Thanx for writing this..Timothy r

Thankz for commenting my poems 2 and I LOVE yours cute but yet simple their awesome!

hi lexi lou
your poem reminds me of the infatuation i felt for a woman who inpired many poems
i wrote a villanelle on infatuation it is on this site the title is infatuation

what a great poem. Something every girl or guy goes through. Yes i've been there writing that special guys name over and over on a pad of paper sitting in class. Wanting him to know but he likes the other girl so his name is left on the pad, and never spoken. What a great way of wording this, this was a great one i gave you a 5

awesome. the rhyming is very well done, whether it was intended or not, haha, tres bien. another 5 from me, keep it up

excellent poem i must say.........u also 2 hve ur way with wrds .....well dune keep up the excellent wrk xx

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