Did you really Change?

by dawn   Oct 7, 2004



My Heart broken
An impact made
For only one week
A huge one at that

I couldn't forget you
I wouldn't forgive you
I couldn't give you another chance
To break my heart once again

I couldn't like you
Not again
I wanted to erase you from my memory
and from my heart

I wanted to give you another chance
I believed you had changed
When in my heart I knew you hadn't

My friends urged me not to
They told me to think of others
I couldn't when you hurt me
I felt as if I couldn't trust another guy
Not to do the same thing as you....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    This is a very warm and heartfelt poem, it is written very well but I notice a few things which could do with cleaning up - I feel like the grinch for mentioning this but honestly, it's nothing major.

    For example the opening line
    My Heart broke(n) - or My heart is broken (I think moving the n works out better).

    The only reason I mention this is because we do it but I wanted to try and be a little constructive. I think you have a great talent and I love your style of writing.

    Keep 'em coming!

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    yes it is and my bf yes

  • 19 years ago

    by Casey

    I like it, it's really just flat out truthfulness. You asked for criticism though, so all I have to say is that it has an odd flow to it. but, coming from me thats like calling the kettle black. keep writing and I hope you can get over this kid, i know how it is and its really hard.

    Casey

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    Dawn, your poems are so GREAT!

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Another heartfelt poem beautifully written...i can't critisize on this one also...FIVE all the way...take care and keep smiling..

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