Comments : Real Life Carnival Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Omg...awesome poem megan...should totally be number one!! I loved it..so well-written and creative..and very imaginative...beautiful work hunnie <3 xxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx
    Stay strong please..<3

  • 19 years ago

    by Cara

    This poem was very good. I love the comparison to teh carnival cuz' like life is like a carousel! You're an amazing poet!

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Aww thank you! I wasn`t really sure which catagorie to put it in, so I may change it later. Love you lots! Stay strong, chin up.

    xxx Megan xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Thanks, Cara. I actually checked your work out too, which you most likely already know. Great work. Keep it up. ;)

    Megan

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Thank you! I was trying to do something a little different. I actually wrote this one about 2 weeks ago but never had the time to submit it. I also have another one, but for now I don`t have any time alone to write. Once again, thank you!

    Megan xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very interesting title. i really like the concept. it's really unique, i never would've thought of that. excellent poem. keep writing. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Vlad: Thank you, my birthday is today actually, but I very appreciate that. I`ll try and keep writing, but I`m moving into my apartments in a couple days. Anywho, thank you for the comment, take care!

    Victoria: Well thank you, this one was a little complicated for me to write. Stay strong.

    xx Megan xx

    xxx Megan xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    i liked this poem. i liked how you compared life to a nightmarish carnival and how we can never get off of the ride...creative comparison. i also liked how you naraated the poem and wrote it as if you were speaking to your "inner self" very creative. good job,

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Emily Alisha: Wow, thanks a million. That really means a lot. I am at the library now and will be coming back every so often to submit some new work, but it`s hard with me moving. Stay strong, I`ll take a look at your poems every once in awhile. Thank you again.

    Megan xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Pinkalias: Thank you, knowing my work is appreciated really helps things.

    xxx Megan

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! amazing poem! i simply love it!