Very very right on.

thanks that was my first attempt at writting an erotic poem hehe

thanks

Hehe, sounds like you had fun. and aint' nothing wrong with that! Great poem.

<3 Courtney

lol I am a virgin...but yea thanks for your comment...

<3 Chelsea

this was expressive..inspiration..lol...passionate...Keep it up! I really liked it...:)
:D

**Sedusha Love**

wow..thanks lol I never thought of it as "ispirational" but that's awesome thanks for your comment.

<3Chelsea

lol thanks

lol thanks how was is freaky though?

thanks

wow...thanks lol

that's not my style but well that was interesting.

uh...thanks?

thanks

Wow....now that's something for being 14!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!! I had to call my boyfriend after reading that.....HAHA Great poem.....I think that will be next attempt....to write a poem like that....see that you inspired me...lol I will also give this one a 5

Awesome poem. Loved the imagery.