That was really good Lance. I liked the repitition of the last line, it definitely created a strong rhythm. This was pretty short, so I'm expecting some longer ones sometime. I liked the tercet thing, most people write in four lines, but three do the job just as well.

Uhhh.... What Sean said. It was pretty and sad.
Aken Sol

i love dreams, they are an awakening to the soul, you just have to interpret the tiny things you see and you will figure out what they mean...