great poem, you have a wonderful talent. keep up the great work....5

I agree with the comment above I will remember your name, take care and thanks for the comment on my poem

haha, nice poem. you seem really depressed, I hope u'll cheer up...

Oh my... I'm sorry about everything hun. I wish I could take away all your pain. I'm sorry hun just keep your head up. Thank you for the comment. Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

Very sad poem... I hope it's not true and if it is then you so deserve better.. and there is something better out there.. you just have to wait.. I know waiting is hard.. It's the worst thing ever.. But i'm waiting and i know you can too.. Just smile a little more.. And things will surely get better....
Angel

Awesome poem! i hope you didn't try anything crazy. i'm sorry for everything that has happened to you... nobody deserves that. take care of yourself, and thanks for commenting on my poem. try not to let things get to you. i know its hard, but you can pull through. just keep writing. hopefully it will help with the pain.... even if only for a moment. love always, brittany
p.s. you are really pretty... i hope you know that.

wow... that was breath-taking. every line seemed true yet sad. don't worry, we love ya here! i'll always remember you as my (missing) older sis. *hug* take care:)

:( I really love your poetry, you have so much talent..beautiful girl<3 Keep writing. The poem is really sad...I hope your ok.

Oh my goodness.....what a sad poem. If this really happened to you.....I'm so sorry. This is just a classic example of why I feel sad. I feel sad, because I feel sad when other people go through so many other worse things than I do, and yet, I still hate my life. I don't know if that's too confusing, but I can't explain it. Anyway, I'll be quiet and let you keep writing, becuase, lets face it....you've got something special. Thanx once again for comments on my poem. ~dandy~

WOW!!! this was brilliant!! i'm sorry u had to go through that stuff!!please stay strong!! ur poems are amazing!

oh my god....listen to me....all this pain will go away....i know what its like to have abusive parents....its been a long time since then but eventually, it will get better...and believe me....if u just up and quit righting, then i will wonder what happened.....seriously.....i just cant sit back and let something destroy another person....i hate to see people in pain....i know that there's not much i can do but if there is ANYTHING i can, just please, dont hesitate to ask....

I love it I know what its like to be unloved most of my poems relate to that. Good job!! Your poems are amazing.

i find writing in despair, i pull out the
characters i create from pain and anguish. i would rather feel and overcome fear than make it a preamble-this gives chaos room to rule

i REALLY like this

just like any other poems you wrote.. they're great n i love it.. dont stop writing despite all the pain you're going thru~

i like the overall meaning of the poem and the poem itself, just one tip, at times you rhyme a certain ways and times you dont, try to get everything rhyming the same

that was good and well thought out, the story line was well done, the stucture was good to abit too depressing but it was a good read, anyway well take care and try some prozack

Different, Good, but different.

Wow i love this poem... it's beautiful but so sad... almost brought tears to my eyes... keep up the amazing work girl!

xox, PorteR

Really enjoyed the poem.