Amazing.You gave some real talent.I can relate,not to all of it,but to some.So many people are screwed..

GOOD GOOD POEM TRY READING MINE CALLED Shadows

hey that was pretty tight i usaully dont read long poems but i was really into urs......and i understand with the depression part it helps to know im not in it alone!!!thanx great poem*5
**Lexy**

Speechless, In Awe and amazed!

Thanks for sharing this with us it was spectacular!

Great poem... no... awesome poem... but that always gets cliche. I'm sorry about your situation, and I can only hope and pray that it will get better for you!

Keep writing!

FUK ME , AWESOME .. READ IT OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER ...
I USUALLY LIKE TO PICK MY FAVOURITE LINES OR VERSES AND POINT THEM OUT TO THE WRITTER , I CANT WITH THIS POEMS , ITS JUST TO DAMN GOOD

So ill live my live
With my cursed friends just like me
As we dwell here in the shadows
Desperate to be free
Longing for the sun
To chase our troubles away
To bathe us in light
But here in the shadows we’ll stay "
i absolutly love that stance. this was a lovely poem, i liked how you told stories of many tortured people and what their secrets bestow upon their lives. good job,

wow that was an amazing poem... it was very sad but very true... best of luck
~cort~

excellent

awwwwww thats a great poem!!!!!

Welcome to my favourites!
xxxxxxx

This poem is very good. I enjoyed reding it. I can't wait to read more!

Wow that was an awesome poem so much passion and it flowed so well. excellent job keep it up.

Wow this is really good. I liked the miny stories you told about people. And I hope this isn't real, and if it is I am really sorry and If you want to talk just pm me.

Wow. amazing poem. just amazing. i hope you and your friends get through these times. just hang in there. the sun will come out soon. it has to.

Hey,
I really enjoyed your poem, its not like any others that I have read.
*Sara

Beautiful poem <3

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Fantastic poem.
Very Powerful and deep!
Nice wording
Keep writing
=)
5/5