that was a really good poem keep it up

Danielle

aww that was so nice. Great job!!

OMG! What a great poem yet so true...the worst feeling in the world is knowing that the one thing you regret is not telling that someone sooner just how you felt about them and maybe it might've made a difference! Great work, keep it up...you've got real talent.
mwa!!!

such a kick ass poem

Wow, I`m truly impressed. This was the first poem I have ever read that actually made me cry. Some have brought tears to my eyes, but with this one I actually had to wipe away the tears. I know you aren`t thinking about doing this, but the anger must have come from somewhere. I hope you are alright. Stay strong.

xxx Megan

No anger is in me. It just came to me when I was bored in school. I'm glad you liked it though.
-Conner

omg thats sucj a good poem it gave me chill bumps it was so sad!

awesomely kool poem

damn im speechless that was such a chilling poem - great job...its great your putting this message out too because tragedies like this happen all too much these days and they are avoidable - great job putting it down!!

Luv Eirisa

I THINK THE MOROL OF THIS POEM IS SPEAK YOUR MIND BEFORE ITS TO LATE

I loved the poem! I wasn't expecting it to end like that at all..Good job! Keep up the beautiful work. :) xoxox. <3

that is so sad....but REALLY good....god loves you remember that...

that was excellent. wonderfully written

i loved i nearly cried you would be a very good writer......keep it up. email me any other poems you have written
love ya always

oh no. that sucks. she loved him....

great poem. ur a great writer.It made my cry. Never wait to tell sumone you love them, no matter wut.

*~Emily~*

Awesome job. I am speechless.

wow! that poem was so sad, but i lovved it.

WOW. This is such a sad and unique poem. it's very touching. the message is very powerful, no matter how down and bad you feel, there is someone out there who loves you. Yous did a brilliant job. xmollyxx

I like it alot but I find the sentence length slightly irregular. Otherwise very good. However, I asked for poems that nobody had seen before...