I chose to end it that way because it kind of gives you the idea of what happens or what you think might happen to this guy as a result of having a hand placed on his shoulder.

However I added an ending line, so tell if its better.

Glad u liked it. More will come in the near future. and Pearl your "Bobby whats 1+2"? poem was funny for 2 reasons: 1) it was also very creative and 2) I knew some people in high school that dumb. keep it up. Oh and Jazzi "God Forbid" that ever happens in real life. I would never be or walk the same.

Stay cool

wow. you had a bad day, huh? i liked the little cliffhanger in the end. yep, it is creative. keep on writing. take care:)

Omg I loved that! It's great!

Great poem - I WANT AN ENDING but i think those were your intentions with this piece - let the readers imagination plague and run wild with possibilities of what the hairy hand could have brought (in comparison especially to the hugely CRAP day this poor fella has had LOL) WELL DONE so original!!!
=Eirisa=xoxo
PS: Pls correct me if my interpretation is WAY OFF :o)

Eirisa you are right on the money, that's exactly why I ended it that way. Just as you said, to let imaginations run wild. Kinda leaves you wondering what hapened next, but I'm prettty sure you all know what ever it was it wasn't good.