wonderful poem!

wow! that's sooooo well written. I love how it turns colder rather than starts sad and keeps it. you're really gifted. keep writing!

O my GOSH..I dont even know what to say..beautiful, amazing, powerful, awesome...SUPER well written!!! WOW girl that is TALENT...talent!!!! damn! great job!

Oh Amy...this piece is breathtaking! I could smell the sea spray and feel the wind gently blowing! You have an amazing gift with words..I especially love the lines:
When I sit on the beach
In the soft, grainy sand
As the moon shines down
And the wind holds my hand

Very enchanting stanza....Great job!!

Amazing poem Amy. Beautiful descriptions of the settings and the sky. I love this because I do and feel the exact same most of the time. It truly sucks if you're feeling that way, but just know you're not alone.
-Lance

Amy this is a beaut. Excellent work here. Keep it up!!

i feel the same in every way i jutshad a break up with my bf but now im gettin happier coz we r msakiin up slowin. well wonderfull poem and i hope to read more of ur poems coz they r great this is my e-mail addy dolphin_robertson@hotmail.com