nice one!

Whoa. this is suberb. wow cantchange me, you get better with every poem. i love this, its the kind of thing i would write about and this has to be my favorite stanza
"The worlds heart
Balanced upon media's tongue
A man-made disease
Solely injected into everyone"
i really love how this poem was written. tc. xmollyxx

This poem was truly amazing!!! I really LOVE the poems you write, they are soo awesome!

Good point i like your form of expression