Nice ending to that. I like the poem, but I've seen immaculate fury in one of your other poems. Don't repeat too much =).

lol, mebbe there is a connection between this poem and that one....

Yes, it is about The Stranger, no it is not from The Stranger.

wow....excellent poem!

O.o
It is from the stranger yet it's not from the stranger.... My head hurts....
So are you writing it from the viewpoint of the Sun? lol. Im sorry. This is.... this reminds me of Stranger in a Strange Land. I don't know why, but it does. Sean, explain this to me later.
Aken Sol

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

Rather resplendently grim and poignant.