Comments : If You Allow Me To Come....

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Aww Kumar this is so beautiful and romantic! I absolutely loved! Your choice of words were amazing and the flow from each stanza to the next was just spectacular! =) Another great one! Keep it up and take care!

    ~Grace

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    very well written, I really enjoyed reading this poem, repeatedly. good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaleigh

    hey i just wanted to say that this was a great poem, for some unknown reason it made me think of how much i love kyle and what i would do for him, so thanks you kinda hit me in the face

  • Thats the sweetest poem i read recently. You have a great heart. The love you portrayed is so divine. So much selfless..

    Love, Trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    heavenly 5.>>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Ophelia

    i love it...so real...keep it up!!!

    alwayz,
    *tink*

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    if u allow me,may i suggest something????
    publish ure work! its BRILLIANT!