awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

wow Jackie, I was gonna write mine too, but you beat me to the ounch, verry good my dear. You are one of my faves, thanx, Timothy r

I meant punch, not ounch..lol

wow. powerful stuff here. I remember having to write our obits in school for creative writing, but we were supposed to only write positive stuff lol, very original poem! And powerful conclusion

Very good. I have a poem called Amanda and she is my very best friend. She moved to a different part of Florida and I was so mad at first. She was getting real bad into drugs at only 13, she had already been to a rehab for cocaine...But she moved away and left all of that behind. She's a beautiful woman now. This poem reminded me of her. Awesome poem, well written!!