I don't know much about sonnet's but this one was really nice, good first poem...LiL One

Great job. sonnets are really hard to write and you did an excellent job. i love the 3rd stanza, its very sweet, emotive and beautiful. xmollyxx

Wow....first poem to ever leave me speachless....great poem!!! Keep them coming!
~*~Christina~*~

this is really good styled, i know what hard work it is
it is a very good sonnet in shakespearean form
and that you have to read "my wretched soul" like "my wretchid soul" - is just beautiful - i like this old form
i can only repeat me, it is really, really good - i would give you 6 points if i can ;)

another wonderful sonnet. Keep up the astonishing work. 5/5.

very good =) well done!! keep it up.. I voted a 5! hugs

loved it xx

well written