Aww so beautiful Kumar!!! I loved this one! The last stanza really touched me, the entire poem did really. Another great one! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

this poem was to the point and it showed real emotion. The last stanza is very special, its very beautifully written! Well Done Kumar!

This poem made me literally heart broken.. A feeling like it really happened to me.. Thats a very true feeling.. The poem was so touching.. Thanks for th epoe. Take care, Trincy.

Full of passion and emotion great write

you have a very extensicve vocabulary and it can be intelectual but at the same time....peaceful! you are very good at this poetry thing and this poem is truly awesome!
lexi lou

"For you,these promises might be just a game,
but why u choose to play that game in my name,
thinking what all you said was true,
this stupid heart is still in love with you."
all i can say is wow.

I like this good good job