WOW MARTA!!! OMG...I don't even know what to say...SO POWERFUL!!!! my heart was beating so fast, you put soo much emotion in it!! really wonderful work!!!
I hope your doing okay!!!
luv ya!!!
MOI ;)

that was such a good poem

That poem was really good, It had so much emotion in it...keep it up!!

Excelent poem....but I dont know why you would feel that way.
~*~Christina~*~

that was really good! but just keep your head up...things get better in the end, if its not better, its not the end...

Chilling and so tragic, bery similar to a few of my writes but this brought such tears and saddness over me - you expressed their stories and feelings as tho your were walking in thier shoes and thats just how i interpreted it as a reader - you should be so proud of this! Eirisa

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

wonderful Marta. You've got talent!
--Monique

way to go this poem is very sad but I think that most of us can relate to feeling like that at one time or another in our life and for making it so dramatic and down to earth I give you a five. Keep up the good work

wow!! that was amazing!! you have lots of talent!! keep ya head up and saty strong!! :)

wow... that poem is really really good. i dont know how to explain the thought that the poem put in my head. awesome

wow that is SO good! i hope things get better for you, that is such an amazing poem though! keep writing!

-jenn

aww I loved it! You have some real talent!!!
Love Always,
Angel