wow, this is written very lovely!

this was a great poem. very sweet! Great job!
Emily

I really liked this poem, you had so many different examples it was fun to read.

I must say i really liked it, great work =)

wow! i love, love, love. love .love truly LOVE this poem! the stanza Id embarrass myself in public
Just to bring a smile to your face
The memory of you
Is one that cannot be erased made me shutter becuase i know all to well how it feels! i love your work! keep in touch!
lexi lou

I really can relate to that! im in love with my brothers best friend and he made it like he cared for me 2 but now i know he just used me but i cant help but still care for him! I really loved your poem!

good poem...keep writin

excellent.