Comments : My mistake

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! excellent job!

  • 19 years ago

    by amber

    I like ur poem soo much! its really really good! It means a lot to me 2 cause i always try 2 express myself like that but it never seems 2 work. great job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    I thought this was absolutly brilliantly written. Absolutly incredible...Very deep and emotional..and meaningful...Hope everything is alright with you my dear...xxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx
    Hope to read more soon....

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    thats amazing, it made me cry, i can tell its personal, and am disapointed not that many commented on it, cuase you need to know this is wonderful, its so sad, and i can realate so well...always in a gutter...Lee

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    I loved this poem. It was very personal, in sum way to proli so many people. and it is sad that not a lot of people commented cause this is worth it. Great job as always.
    Emily!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Had to garner alot of courage to get to the end. trully emotional. Hope you are ok now?
    Take care, nice write.