by pinkalias          Oct 14, 2004
    
        category :
            Dark, fantasy /
            fantasy, mystical
            
    
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            You are the puppet master, i am your block of sickness | 
by Shædow Poet
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            *gawks with eyes wide open* holy moley that was the best dark poem I've ever read!  Your words are enticing, dark and highly chilling, the first few lines definetely captivated me. | 
 
    by Taylor
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            Great Poem!!! This is amazing and so entrancing! I love every flow of the words! They haunt my mind tugging on my vision so I can read this amazing poem! Every minute of it caught my attention! Keep up the great work! | 
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            A startling, vivid hell.  You're able to paint quite a picture until horror has become a beginning instead of a means to an end.   | 
by Seronum
| wow!, nice work! you are very excellent on descriptive work and show nice talent in deepness. most of my poems are also deep check em out. I think you rated one of mine i forget which one it was. anyways nice work :) | 
by FTS Miles
| Terribly and beautifully disturbing. Once again, great imagery woven within an engaging tale. I love your poetry! |