Comments : She don't know...

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Beautiful poem Jamie..so well written and so deep...If you find the courage, you should show your mom this...I think she would understand if you told her...and I bet she'd be a way better mom...I've missed your gorgeous writings, Jamie...I'm glad to hear from you again...Hope to hear more soon...Love you xxxxxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxTakeCarexxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Aww, that was sad, but really well written. I agree with the pain within, if you do find the courage, you really should show your mom this, tell her how you feel ye know? i might not know much, but if she saw what you wrote and felt about her, maybe something inside would make her change, and she'd treat you more in a respectable motherly way. awesome poem, and keep writing. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..I really Love this poem and am soo glad you shared it with us!!! I can SOO totally relate to this!!! You've written what I have tried to express but never could!! AMAZING and thanks!!! I wish you all the strength in the world to give it to her!! I hope you do! Good luck!! and great poem!
    much luv
    elizabeth