please comment and vote!!
much love
-Mols

Aww i really enjoyed this one!! Made me picture it and i love poems that do that! You did a great job wish i could rate higher then a five!! Much love to you,
~Chelsey~

great poem! its hard to believe you are only 16 and you write like a profesinal! wow! you a truly talented! would you mind commenting on some of my poems? maybe your talent will rub off....keep in touch!
lexi lou