WOW! That is Very MOVING! I know what you feel- because i live that struggle too! But- absolutly marvellous work!

wow!!! wonderful poem!!

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

I LOVE DAVID!!!!!

its an awesome poem. wow...really good. thanks so much for the note on my poem. i'm really glad that you liked it, and that i was able to communicate with other people and get in touch with other people's feeilngs other than mine. i hope things work out for you. take care,
-annie

this is incredible m'love! so amazingly written! i loved it!...you're a fabulous writer, dear. I hope you continue writing :) xxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Oh wow, Drafter. That means a lot that you said that. Thank you very very much.

its da meanest i love it write more u rock