excellent poem!!

Such a cool poem, brings across the emotion... very strong words, when I read it I was thinking about the terroist... I feel this is more of a dark poem than sad, what do you think?? Anyway, good work as always :) Keep it up.

I like this it's really good i'm suprised it's rated so low!!

wow big words but perfect meaning! you are really good at poetry! keep it up you got talent! keep in touch
lexi lou

Very nice!!! Keep em comin

Wow, really nice poem hun! I loved it! Keep it up and take care! Oh and thank you for your sweet comment! =)

~Grace

I wish your poem only had relevance in the past... unfortunately there's an ugly rise in fascism and Neo-Nazism both in the United States and in Europe. The past might repeat itself more quickly than we might otherwise think.

Regardless, good poem, Victoria.

Great poem. Composed in simplicity, but emits a wide range of images. Thanks for the comment, meant a lot to me=)

- Colin

I think it was a great poem. It was too the point but it was also... emotional too. :)

yes, absolute wonderful poem...keep it up vic...and thanks for the nice comment, take care.

Very powerful poem, confirms the saying that 'he who 4gets history is destined 2 relive it'. you paint a vivid picture of the horror that was that time. Keep up the great work.

very nice weaving of words.

Excellent poem, The horrors should never be forgotten And people are forgetting people are letting racism back into the world. You paint an excellent picture with this poem. :)

Excellent piece. I love the format, the words you use are so expressive. Superbly written~Holly

we can never forget the past, for the past brought us today. With the dark and evil comes the better times. But I still can't beilve what a great poem this was. It brought back some images I had when I went to the holucst musem. No where near the real thing I couldn't even imagine. But wow you really have a way with your words!

woah, 1st time ive ever read nething by u. really did take my breath away for a second. great job!

Jesus shit girl let me say i am jewish well by blood :-p
But i really liked that, it was amzeing.
work of art and keep it up.

Excellent poem, I agree with everyone else about the realization that comes to mind by reading it. Keep up the good work

Wow. You are sooo talented. And I'm not just saying that, you know like everyone on this site says "Oh, you're soooo good" when really they couldn't write it their life depended on it. You, my dear are one of a kind. I find it VERY hard to believe what your profile says...you are 13??? Well, you have a HUGE future ahead of you. You are completely awesome, girlfriend! Keep up the damn good work!

Oh my gosh I love this line *Death is the future. Living is torture.* Awesome job all around. >3jess