interesting poem

like andrea said interesting...as a poem it's awesome but its kinddaa hard to guess wat happened to you when u wrote this...

Wateva

It's about wanting and hating a nightmare. Send it back to hell. That sort of thing.

"Nauseating is your lustful sickness.
Smothered in delusions,
paint for me a picture
of failure."
wow...so pretty. i love the words you used, they made the writing so lovely. It's short, but beautiful. i love how you put the stances together and used words that meant something instead of common things we use everyday. great job

p.s. to that other girl, u dont have to understand "what happened" a poeam doesnt always have to tell a story. sometimes its just about putting words together that have been forming in your head that might mean something...it doesnt always have to "make sense"

hey tiffany darl, i love your work. i envy the fact you can manipulate your words to say exactly what you want the reader to pick up on. Totally jealous of your talent and i mean it! have a look at some of my newer stuff if you want to, much better than my old shabby work, except for my "hello".
Again, love your talent, envy the power it goes with!!

Wow... beautiful... just like your other work, you definetely DO have a way with words.
I just wanted to say thankyou for all your lovely comments on some of my poems, it makes me feel extremely happy that people out there appretiate it. I also would like to thank you for writing such beautiful poems (one day I aspire to write great poems like yours). I also would like to thank you for being my favourite poet on this site :) you truly are extremely talented.
That was a long comment, I know :P

wow, your approach is very unique, i enjoy your style and am impressed by the whole greek thing. keep it up.

intresting ...

not real anything I can directly praise in this poem.....very expressive. I like it.