Hey I thought this was a really good poem and is well written and in detail.Thanks for putting it on here so I could read it.I enjoyed being able to read that and hopefukky I will be able to read some more of your work in the future!

thank you so much

it was really good!

~love mello~

loved it...great great job! keep it up

thanks

this poem reali touched ma heart coz ive bin thru something similar 2 that and it made me realize how many ppl i wud hurt if i had gone ahead with my plan!!

I liked your poem alot it reminds me of me .

thanks

Omg.....Your poem made me like breakdown...I'm still crying. Yea I have alittle problem that has to do with what ur poem leads to...i could never take it that far but now since i read that it actually made me see it through my mothers eyes. Which is something I havent even been able to do when it comes ot that situation...

wow is all i can say .... definite 5.. if i could give u a ten on this i would

WOW...that was mindblowing!!! It made me cry just sitting here!!! Wow...keep up the good work!!!
Luv ya

WOW...that was mindblowing!!! It made me cry just sitting here!!! Wow...keep up the good work!!!
Luv ya

this is a great poem, excellent job. i loved it!
~Emily~

WOW YOU HAVE LEFT ME SPEECHLESS THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

Thats is such a great poem it really reminded me of something that has happened to me and alot of my friends, it really touched me considering my friend that died about a year and a cupple days ago, and one of my friends that is cutting him self agian and I'm the only one that knows I have no clue what to do if you have anything I can say to him tell me. any way great poem It really is it made me cry! keep the good work up

This poem is sooooooooo beautiful I LOVE IT

that was a good poem keep wrighting

That was so great! i love all your poems!! they all make me cry, which is something i dont do too much!! keep up the good work! how old r u btw?

im 14, and thanks

i loved it