not true at all...i just noticed how all my poems are about the same things, and decided to give this one a twist.

Candy that poem was amazing I personally love all of them, they make me want to write better and you have alot of talent keep writin

thnx

wow, you really have a knack for puting words together.i really like you writting

I think this is poem is really good... In a very twizted sort of way but i like it!

Hey That Was So Good.... I Really like you rwirteing...... You Should Check out mine some time.... Its the same kinda stuff

this poem is very interesting candy i liked it a lot read summa mine and tell me what you think

Not one of your best? Then your others must be spectacular! I shall read them! ahem.. very good!!

WOW!!! i certainly hope that this didn't really happen but you kept my eyes glued to every word...it was so full of suspence, i loved it!

wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

xoxoxoxoxox

wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

xoxoxoxoxox

wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

xoxoxoxoxox

wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

xoxoxoxoxox

woah sht sorry i didnt realise i submitted the comment like 5 times..it wouldnt come up as ur comment has been added so i jus kept submitting it..sorry!

xoxo

Chilling girl and whatta original twist well done on a fantastically rythmic and vivid poem!

wow. for it not being your best its pretty damn good. keep it up!

thanks

WOW!!! bravo bravo! Give yourself a pat on the back for that one! I have no idea what to say ..a good job,,a great job..i dont know!! That poem left me at the edge of my seat..i hope it was a story and not true! but this was just amaing i had such teary eyes! well done...: Take care! much love,
~Chelsey~

i can relate to suicide thing. i've tried but little at a time. i really like the discription and the detail.great poem.

by the way read my poems