My girl friend was cheated on more then once with her old boy friend.
I said I will never cheat on here!
but she dont trust me and I can under stand why she wont...
But I know she loves me and I love her

Thanks for reading it amy=)

-Josiah

Thanks jennifer I am glad you like it!

honey i love you and i do trust you i hope you know that i love you

I wanted to come by and say WELCOME TO THE CLUB. And since it's a "poetry" club I figured I'd read a few of your poems.

This I think is something that every girl or most girls face. After being hurt it's hard for us to move on and trust someone new. That goes away with time. If you love her...stick around and she'll open up.

I think you should check the definition of "vain" to see if that's the word you really wanted to use or maybe just reword your sentence to make it fit in context.

"But then you said thoughts words" I didn't understand this line. I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say.

I’ve enjoyed getting to know you by reading your writing.... :)

great poem...
Completely trusting someone is quite hard... But I'm sure deep down she does...
x0x0

wow very nicely done....i really liked it...great job...luv yas mwah 5/5

-kayla-

Aww great job....hope all is okay hun! thankd for the comment on my poem and keep writing bc this is a great job...you truely have talent....luv yas mwah

-kayla-