thanks!
much love,
-Molly

Hello dear, it is my pleasure to provide feedback for this piece.

Fsams analysis of your poem

Heading:

The heading "Because of you" is very cohesive and relavent to the content of the poem. The poem talks about what had happened because of you.

Poetic competence:

The poem is 96% freeverse and 4% rhyming. Thats no a problem but that is just a great style. A hotch potch of both styles make is a great piece with rhythm and good flow.

Content:

The poem is informative, mounful and explanatory. The message is crystal clear and the lexis used in this piece are cohesive and appropriate.

Rating:

For sure it is 5/5 :)

Remarks:

I liked the way you have explained the poem with overflowing feelings and strong emotions. Keep it up and do write some more sad ones. I love them :)

With love
Fsams