yes you are very lucky to have a best friend by your side. good poem!

At first glance, I thought it was just a run-on paragraph. You need to go to the next line whenever a new thought starts. You can't have it all in one paragraph like that. It ruins the whole poem. Also, you might want to get someone to check over the spelling/grammar, because there are a few mistakes. Honestly, I can't say much more about it. Once you've formatted it into more of a poetic structure, then I'll comment on it again.