Once again, wow. That is all I have to say. You are a unbelievable writer. Keep up the work. Cuz its great.

This poem is very good, but I don't think the rhyming does it justice. Great poem, anyway. 4/5.

intresting....good poem!!!! x)

o.O okay see now i think was your best so far. lol. in style and spelling errors and just all around poemness!(you were right i need a bigger vocabulary) and it flowed rather well too! *claps* (one spelling mistake waist is spelt waste in the context you meant it)
~Freak~

The last lines were the best! I enjoyed this. Once again, creative idea for a poem. I think in this one the flow needs work, but other than that I don't have anything else to say, because i really liked it. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Loved it....5/5 keep up the good work
*~*cryingontheinside*~*

pretty good. not ur best. 5/5 overall!!!!!!

Excellent piece of work Robert. Great imagery.

the flow was a little choppy but i thought all in all it was a pretty good poem:) Well done

the poem seems to reflect the suvival of the fitest . A great mystery of nature is that our human nature is much the same... thought provokig poem...5

wow...greatpoem :D

Good poem! keep writing and keep up the great work!

Food tree. :) You used the word tike, too.

Cool how you can capture an animal and make it dramatic...But that's true poetry, right?

A creative and descriptive piece of poetry, with good use of imagery.

Keep Writing
Nici

like all the others i have read great poem